Friday, 24 March 2017

Explanation template : Who my role model is and why? W5 T1.

WALT - Plan for a  piece of explanation writing.
-Use the' Title-Introduction-Information-Conclusion (TIIC)


“Who are my role models?” My role models are the two most important people who gave me life. I picked my parents because they showed me the world and they have always loved and took the time to take care of me.

My first role model is my mum, I think my mum is a great role model because she has always tried to give me everything I need, take care of me and for that I am grateful. Also I know how hard it is to take care of three kids on your own without dad around.

My second role model is my dad, I could think of one hundred reasons for why my dad is best role model. My dad is a kind heart ed person who will help anyone that is in need and, my dad is also a strong person who puts a lot of effort into everything he does.

My parent are those things wrapped into one make me and my siblings the most luckiest kids in the whole world.

Over all I want to grow up and best just like them with a kind heart, strong and to have the potential to keep moving forward. I love my parent and I look up to them as a role model and parents.
-----------------------------------------------------------------Task: Today's writing was about explanation writing. The explanation writing was hard at first but as I got the hag of it started to become more easy, explanation writing is about explaining the reason why you like or hate that thing or what you enjoyed about it.

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