Wednesday, 24 August 2016

Productive Writing.

WALT: I understand what different types of sentences I can use in my writing.

Introduction:Who:The runners The Rio olympics,What:One of the racer fall over and sprained his leg,When:It was drawing a sprinting race,Where:At the 2016 rio olympics.
Orientation: All of the sprinters were getting ready at the starting line.
Problem/Conflict: Someone kicked his leg and his leg twisted on its owin,Why:So the other racer could come first.
Solution: Was showing sportsmanship and never giving up.
All of the racers were getting ready for the race, while they were waiting at the starting line someone had said Ready set GO!!!” Bang!. As soon as the trigger on the gun had been pulled I had sprinter and dashed off in first place slowly moving towards the finish line.
As I arriving at the corner someone had tripped over but in the process they had twisted there leg, “Help” he said as he tried to get back up into the race, I stopped to help him but I could see all of the other sprinters in the dissidents.
When all of the racers had passed by we had already give up but before we did, I could almost see the finish line so I had carried him all the way to finish line. Everyone started to shout and cheer us on.
As we crossed the finish line the judges rushed over and said “ We have decided to let you two to go into the finale for showing sportsmanship.”

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